The wedding guest quoted ‘ I fear thee, ancient mariner. She was almost as if scared of him. She thought he was the one who killed the crew members. Then she dropt not down. All alone ancient mariner was felling pain, his heart was in agony. many men had lived on the ship, and so did the ancient mariner. he looked to heaven and tried to pray, then something spoke to him, and made his heart dry as dust. he heard his heart thumping loud. He looked around himself and all there were, was dead bodies lying on the floor.
Ancient mariner heard something. Every dead body twitched their eyes and stared at ancient mariner. They looked at him like they’ve never passed away. Ancient mariner could see a course that would drag him to hell, step by step. A spirit from up above in the sky, and every day that passed he would the same curse over and over and over again. In the distance he saw something shining bright in his eyes. A ship, charmed water burnt all away, and covered in awful red.
Beyond the shadow of the ship, bright water snakes drifting over to the ancient mariner, and they fell of in hoary flakes. he described it as the most beautiful thing he has ever seen in his life. A spring of love gently pounced in his heart and blessed him. That moment ancient mariner could finally prey, and then from his neck so free the albatross fell off and sank like a lead under the sea.
Strong metaphor I chose: ‘I looked upon the rotten sea’
I think this metaphor that I chose is strong because it is comparing the sea being disgusting by using the word rotten instead of using the word horrid for example. if you imagine it the word rotten is describing as the sea being green and dark colours.
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